Double page spread edited part 1

I have change my double page spread, i have tried to make the text easier to read, by changing the font, and also the colour, and i have also changed the colour and size of the text of the page number, to try and make that also easier to read, and also i have added the title of my magazine above the interview title, so that the reader will always see the title of the magazine throughout, and try and make them remember the name. I have added some shapes around the text, i have seen this doe inside of a kerrang magazine, and i am basing my magazine around kerrang as they have similar bands, and also similar to my target audience.