My audience research

From my audience research I have received many comments about the pictures, the text on the double page spread, and about how the magazine is very basic. I will need to fix the text on the double page spread to make it easier to read, i will change the font, and colour and maybe even the font size, i will need to take more pictures, and use musical props to show that the magazine is a music magazine. Also i will need to add more complex stuff into the magazine, for example editing the text, adding a logo, and editing the pictures also. I will be keeping in the bar code, and also the quotes from the interview, but also adding a issue number and making the page numbers easier to view also.